Why Do You Make Me Feel This Way?

Just a poem I wrote.. I'd love some feedback.

I've spent the last few weeks trying,

Just trying to get you off my mind.

I can't seem to do it though..

Why do you have this affect on me?

I can't seem to figure it out.

 

I like you,

so very much.

I don't want to,

but I can't help it.

 

Every time I try to think of reasons not to like you,

All I can think of are the reasons

why I do like you.

 

Why?

Please explain why you do this to me.

Do you even know?

I don't believe you do.

 

I'm debating on telling you how I feel,

But every time I try to,

I chicken out.

I don't want to lose you,

Ever.

 

Please don't run away when I tell you,

When I tell you my feelings.

It would kill me, and

I'm not ready to die yet..

Author's Note

I love criticism. Please tell me what you think, and what I could improve on. Thanks!

Reviews

[Zaniriah]

I feel poetry is your expression of your feelings. So I don't feel truly there is any right or wrong way. I can relate to this and to me that's what's it's about bringing out emotions from the reader. You have done that and well. Great work.

[Kayla]

In all honesty, I've wrote poetry for a long time and this is great! I don't see where you need to make any changes! Great job!