Why Do You Make Me Feel This Way?

Why Do You Make Me Feel This Way?

A Poem by Bailey
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Just a poem I wrote.. I'd love some feedback.

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I've spent the last few weeks trying,

Just trying to get you off my mind.

I can't seem to do it though..

Why do you have this affect on me?

I can't seem to figure it out.

 

I like you,

so very much.

I don't want to,

but I can't help it.

 

Every time I try to think of reasons not to like you,

All I can think of are the reasons

why I do like you.

 

Why?

Please explain why you do this to me.

Do you even know?

I don't believe you do.

 

I'm debating on telling you how I feel,

But every time I try to,

I chicken out.

I don't want to lose you,

Ever.

 

Please don't run away when I tell you,

When I tell you my feelings.

It would kill me, and

I'm not ready to die yet..

© 2012 Bailey


Author's Note

Bailey
I love criticism. Please tell me what you think, and what I could improve on. Thanks!

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I feel poetry is your expression of your feelings. So I don't feel truly there is any right or wrong way. I can relate to this and to me that's what's it's about bringing out emotions from the reader. You have done that and well. Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


In all honesty, I've wrote poetry for a long time and this is great! I don't see where you need to make any changes! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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