Time

It brings memories...
Create scenarios and mechanical injuries.
It heals ..it thrills..
Time is the God that certainly kills..
It promises truth and sculptures lies..
It brings pain and the happiness dies..
It creates Havoc but is the ultimate peace.
It is the glory...that everyone seize..
It makes it rain..it makes sunny days..
It brings on life and curves in death..
Time is the God and the devil's head.

Moupran.

Reviews

[Luna]

It sure blew me away. Times maybe precious but sometimes they suck especially when its moving so slow in your working hours and when I sit to write something Its gone. Really Time what Have I ever done to you. Oh well if it weren't for Moupran I wouldn't have seen this poem today. Thanks Moupran for letting me have a nice time :)

[Miss Ithaca]

"Time is the God that certainly kills.. " works so well. Maybe play with punctuation some more? Using ... versus - may help you expand and play with timing through the piece.

[Poetic Angel]

I especially like the last line. This is powerful!!!

[Moupran]

Thnx a lot..@poetic angel.

[Moupran]

Thnx a lot @Luna...I m glad that you liked it

[Moupran]

Thanks a ton Ithaca...sure try to improvise next time