haiku

I want the big tone

One enough to cover me

In bright, cozy sounds  

 

Reviews

[Jon Gary Frost]

good haiku. i believe i now owe you a sonnet. a deal's a deal.

and i do like the imagery. this one makes me feel a jazz blanket wrapping around me.

[Legion]

I like the thought and the write, but you have one too many syllables in the second line. You have 8 where it should be seven.

Perhaps instead of "One big enough...." to just "Large enough...."