HAIKU 10

 

the moon aimlessly
moves through the vaporous night
begging for loose change

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

It was better than "Cats," and it was better than "Haiku 9." Haiku 9 left me somewhat wanting. :)

Good write.

-Gabe

[mattavelli]

This is great!!
I don't have any change, go way!!

[Brett Campaigne]

the reversal in the third line makes for an interesting and original haiku.