My love.

Oh lord,

what happened?

why did this happen?

I'm alone.

Someone, anyone protect me from this.

I don't want to face it,

as I sit here, on our-my bed,

i think to myself,

I'm sorry i wasn't there for you...

I'm on the bed sobbing for you-

for you to return to me-

please my angel,

save me from this grief!

I

  Love

     You.

I'm sorry I didn't save you from HIM.

Do you forgive me?

the answer i'll never know.

your gone now,

and your now one of heaven's angels.

I know your in a better place now,

yet i can't help but miss you.

Do you miss me?

Do you even remember me?

Who knows when it comes to the afterlife.

But I hope she watches over me.

My dear,

I love you too much to live any longer.

I'm sorry that I'm breaking my promise,

I reach for it,

I see if it's loaded,

one,

two....

 

THREE!!!

I now see you my sweet sweet angel.

I'm glad your not mad

As I take your hand I whisper," I'm sorry, I love you."

She's transparent.

She must be taking me to heaven.

I'm not mad, she says in her sweet angelic voice,

but i just wish you would have lived longer.

We continue the journey to heaven.

 

goodbye world.. .. . . .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is just a poem about a guy losing his wife/lover etc. This was just a random thing I can up with, hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Ethan]

Yeah this is pretty stream of conscious but I don't think that's what you intended.

[closed account]

I hate to agree with the writer below me cause I don't want to offend anyone, I love the concept but
I didn't undertand who it was addressed to and who died? I was a little lost!

[brinkley]

i like the idea. kind of--but it doesn't ring honestly.


like if you've ever lost someone? tap into that, and rewrite it. see what happens.



p.s. ignore the rating--my computer freaked out on me.