my feelings. .

my feelings. .

A Poem by malmal412
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another old one, this is the last old one lol

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!!My feelings!!

When I'm smiling on the outside
I'm crying on the inside

When I'm acting like I dont care what you think
On the inside i'm screaming a whole lotta swear words

When I act like I'm ignoring you
I'm really screaming inside for you to leave me alone

When I'm acting happy
I'm usually wishing to just go home

© 2009 malmal412


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Though similar to the other two, this one allows the sense of rage to come through. Again, another piece that is very relateable. I think this is well written, the gentle use of rhyme is well done. thank you for sharing. Barb

Posted 15 Years Ago


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malmal412
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my full first name is malorie (also pronounced as mallory) lol, i know my name is weird and unique, and so is the spelling lol my nicknames are: mal, malmal, and i have another, but only a few call.. more..

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A Poem by malmal412