The Pain

Laughing is so easy
but when you are alone
the memories haunt again
fear of future strikes your mind
the demon knocks on the door
and you open up without asking
As you lie on the cold ground
The tears race down your face, unintentionally.
You trip over every step you take
Every single word echoes in your head
From time to time the pain demands
To be felt ..

Author's Note

this is inspired by the lines in the picture that is a diolouge from ''The fault in our stars'' amind blowing book ;)

Reviews

[nupur chauhan]

Grtly described the word pain.... I liked the line.... The tears race down ....unintentionally....it described the deepness of the state of ur mind ..... While u were writting this poem .... Every extract of this poem ... Can be felt ... I loved ur poem .... Keep on writing like this dear 😊👍

[Rida Sarwar]

Thankyou so much 😊

[nupur chauhan]

Urs mostly welcome.. 😊 👍

[zunie frost]

nice work ....... good poetry !!!

[Rida Sarwar]

Thankyou 😊

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[Zahra]

From time to time the pain demands
To be felt ..

Well penned.

[Rida Sarwar]

Agreed 😊 thankyou .. and sorry for the late reply ☺

[Roger Turgeon]

It strange how pain takes over our being and senses when we feel it. Tripped on a few tears myself.

[Rida Sarwar]

agreed sir :) as the author in this boom says ''that's the thing about pain, it demands to be felt''

[Sami Khalil]

Pain demands to be felt. Excellent...:)................

[Rida Sarwar]

thank you :)

[A. Amos]

Good work my friend, second and fifth line just fixed typos; i enjoyed the concept...

[Rida Sarwar]

thank you and yes! thanks for correcting :P

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................