House of cards

When I'm alone someone whispers 'don't lose hope, hold on a little longer'

when I'm happy someone burns and its their favor that everything gets ruined 

the sunlight keeps on dancing around reminding me 

that no matter what comes in your path find your way thorough it 

All I don't know is why old times seem like coming back for one more glimpse

 and shatter me on the dirt

what did I do that things went wrong?

what do I say that words seem strong?

broken promises and fake laughter

they don't realize when I blink it away

and I'm shocked and amused how cold world is

 and how I imagined myself to be so ruthless

When I'm nothing more than a house of cards..

Reviews

[Amelia Pagliaro]

"All I don't know is why old times seem like coming back for one more glimpse
and shatter me on the dirt"
I really like this line. It's the opposite of the well used "all i know is.." line. Its obvious contrast to everyday life makes it sound just that much better. I really enjoyed the entire piece, but that line really sat well with me.

[Rida Sarwar]

Thank you so much :)

[A. Amos]

Love the title and the content of your poetry was great...

[Rida Sarwar]

thanks :) this means a lot :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Ahena MK]

they don't realize when I blink it away
and I'm shocked and amused how cold world is...
ahena :) real good ..

[Rida Sarwar]

thank you .. your appreciation means a lot :)

[Saddam]

very dear ful poetry it. and i typed it with scary hand for this lovely poetry. thanks loveya

[Sue Hart]

Oh wow! This was absolutely excellent. Truth rings throughout for all. I am really impressed with this. It should be framed on my wall.

[Rida Sarwar]

oah thank you so much!!! :)

[kumars]

what do say about my card...

[Rida Sarwar]

umm.. excuse me? didn't got your comment?