Venom

They show they love you in real they envy 
They say you are blessed I ask with what? With tears and pain?
The goal they have is to put you down
Show that you are nothing more than a useless pieace of paper lying here
those arms that once hugged you with love now their embrace feels like a death trap
forcing you in and giving you pain
once or twice I bet was enough but now their words cut you like a knife 
ruthless,mean and harsh the pain rushes like a venom..

Author's Note

Tell me what you think? :D

Reviews

[elvenom]

A poem about betrayal; one of the things that hurts the most. There's not much to think of, it simply states some truths for the people in this world. We should just have to believe that not everyone is like this. I hope you find the "anti-venom".

[Rida Sarwar]

yes indeed not everyone :)

[kumars]

i liked it what you said but somewhere you are in dilemma whether one love or envy you. but nice perception good work with worlds.

[Rida Sarwar]

*words and no I'm not in a dilemma I'm just trying to convey the message for the two-faced people in our world :)

[kumars]

ok;.....................