He Is

awe!!!!!

In the midnight air,a scent of his vanilla faire

Encaptured my senses with the sweet memory

Of his exquisitely charming wares

 

His gentle touch of caress that soared me into the night of awakened dreams

Has captured my will completely

In this moment of stillness, i take him into my bossom

With deep passionate desires

 

~I kiss him~

 

My lips forceful upon his mouth with his consent

Quite willing to exhale into the night

Of my yearning to love him

 

~He surrenders~

 

Strong passionate man of wit and charm

His arms encompass my nakedness

With great care and tenderness

He is enthralled in my desire

 

~I am Breathless~

 

In this moment his eyes meet mine

With his whispers upon my cheek

His fragrance of vanilla

Upon every inch of me

 

~I fall~

 

Into perfection as the darkness

Of the misty rain filled night

Falls fullfilled into the brightness of the morning

 

~We are as one~

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Quite willing to exhale into the night
Of my yearning to love him"

beth, this poem here, no less than exquisite, as you charm the reader with full delight, the marvelous sense of timeless romance is the qaulity dreams arer made of, to be taken, you transport the reader
to another place and time, i could quote many lines in this poem as favorite, its a surrendering portrait
of beauty, like a flower blooming in the morning light of summer's invigorating warmth and spell,
you have a heart of passion that knows no limits, encaptured is the word, hypnotic rhythm in beauty

[Antonio Valentino]

Funny how, vanila, is commonly used as a term for, bland or neutral, colorless and dispassionate, and yet it is one of the most delicate and favorite scents there are.

This was wonderful :)
Antonio

[Just Manoosh]

Your structure and verse is quiet exquisite, I love how you round off each stanza with a new breath, a cluster of words that make your heart stop - she sighs -

An stunning burst of sensual poetry.

Mx

[Diamondjules]

Beatifully done, sister! I loved every romatic minute of it - ah - how I wish I could feel that kind of lust in my real life. :)

[Bellarina]

A very well written romantic encounter. Makes me hungry with you talking about vanilla. Very good read. By far one of the best I've read on here.

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Beautiful, sexy piece. I like your use of 'vanilla'. Just the thought of the texture/taste drove your passion home that much harder.

Great write.

[The Musings of Mary H.]

Breathtaking...I too am breathless. = ) I really like your first line, "In the midnight air,a scent of his vanilla faire" because this drew me in. There is something about vanilla that is very sensual. Great work!

Mary