Guilt

Tormenting winds whirl about him

The bashing sounds of lightening

Trembles his mind at every thought

The crackling sounds of breaking glass consumes him

His screams go un-noticed in the thunderous storm of his soul's guilt

He can no longer live with his actions

He is lost in a world of unforgiveness

His actions hurtful

His heart broken

He is empty

And lives,now barren

 

He is Lost.

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

This poem is Great ! I will be adding it to my library. Many have been there and many soon will. Everyone at one time or another in our lives will feel lost within themselves . You paint a picture for the reader to see and leave us hopimg he finds his way home safe. Well done.

[Michael X]

His screams go un-noticed in the thunderous storm of his soul's guilt"
beth, with this piece you used the colors that represent the darker shades of emotion and brush an image of eternal grief overshadowed by a metaphorical image of a raging storm ripping the soul apart, as well, the depthfully charged details are imagined with astonishing effect, as the meaning represents what it means to dwel in under skies darkened by the heart, in saying the entire environment is consumed by guilt, you never cease to stun me with the impacting way you express in defining passionate.

[Cattie]

Lost within ones space.. The emptiness of such vast space can be overwhelming .. perfectionn�, e, Poetess