Hath thou heart risen from the darkened denDoth thine soul yearn to be entwined with theeAnd with words so sweet be there ne'r pretendThat trumpets so sound in glorious gleeFrom the depths of mine desires spadeMine heart beg ne'r more than loving youTis eternal love from angelic bladeTo the sea of our passions tide be trueThat mine heart sings sweet melody boldIn the passion's of my heart you inspireFrom the depths and heights of my loving soulTis you my dear that has started my fireIn the eternal light of yearnings deepTis love's truth of desires so do seep
beth, this is touchingly surrendered from the heart and makes the reader yearn to be an
object of such affection, the passion is overflowing, the classic wording draws on elegance,
eloquence and shimmer of classiness, as you open with a description of what it means
when two hearts become one, as if a twin souls, the rhyme is a burning desirous overflowing
zealous ambition brightening life's path with the eternal light of love, the metaphorical
imagery is dreamy, and creates an atmosphere of absolute passion, as it would be coarsing
through the veins of an artist as inspiration, consuming, marvelous expression, mike
I'm from louisiana and love to drink,laugh and eat seafood of course....writing is a passion of mine and as always..everyday is a learning experience... more..