Trumpets of Love

Trumpets of Love

A Poem by badgirl beth
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passion

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Hath thou heart risen from the darkened den
Doth thine soul yearn to be entwined with thee
And with words so sweet be there ne'r pretend
That trumpets so sound in glorious glee
 
From the depths of mine desires spade
Mine heart beg ne'r more than loving you
Tis eternal love from angelic blade
To the sea of our passions tide be true
 
That mine heart sings sweet melody bold
In the passion's of my heart you inspire
From the depths and heights of my loving soul
Tis you my dear that has started my fire
 
In the eternal light of yearnings deep
Tis love's truth of desires so do seep
 
 
 
 

© 2008 badgirl beth


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beth, this is touchingly surrendered from the heart and makes the reader yearn to be an
object of such affection, the passion is overflowing, the classic wording draws on elegance,
eloquence and shimmer of classiness, as you open with a description of what it means
when two hearts become one, as if a twin souls, the rhyme is a burning desirous overflowing
zealous ambition brightening life's path with the eternal light of love, the metaphorical
imagery is dreamy, and creates an atmosphere of absolute passion, as it would be coarsing
through the veins of an artist as inspiration, consuming, marvelous expression, mike

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful! Truly a firey painting of passion. I am delighted to be reading your work!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2008

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badgirl beth
badgirl beth

somewhere over the snow bank, TN



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I'm from louisiana and love to drink,laugh and eat seafood of course....writing is a passion of mine and as always..everyday is a learning experience... more..

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