In The Madness

In The Madness

A Poem by badgirl beth
"

the struggle to find truth of one's self

"

In the madness

May you find Peace

In your struggle to find the spiritual reverend

May you find happiness

In the reality of your spiritualism

May you find the words of wisdom

That love is life

And without it

Your journey reaches into nothingness

You can search

Endlessly for the answers that hold you captive

And without it

You can search

All eternity for resolutions to your questions

And without it

Life is simply

Quiet

It is Love

That holds the spirit true

It is the Love that lives within you!

There,you will find tranquility~

© 2008 badgirl beth


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beth, this is a beautifully done, the exude of emotional force carries with it
an impacting messege of deliverance, both in mind and spirit, the meaning is uplifting,
and leaves the reader with a lasting impression mirroring the meaning itself
and that being finding peace in the madness, the word placement is stellar,
as well as artistic in design, the sentencing is a bold context to highlight, as it's
a fine poetical result of scripting your thoughts, precision, timeless, to ponder
what love, as well as it's intentions, you have a very nice talent for expression, mike


Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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It sounds as though bad girl Beth has a soft and confident side as well. Mike's review says alot that i would have liked to say. Your words hit home. Making the reader look deep within to find the source of their own true love . To hold your own heart for awile will surely bring you closer to the true meaning of love as you know it. Great job.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

beth, this is a beautifully done, the exude of emotional force carries with it
an impacting messege of deliverance, both in mind and spirit, the meaning is uplifting,
and leaves the reader with a lasting impression mirroring the meaning itself
and that being finding peace in the madness, the word placement is stellar,
as well as artistic in design, the sentencing is a bold context to highlight, as it's
a fine poetical result of scripting your thoughts, precision, timeless, to ponder
what love, as well as it's intentions, you have a very nice talent for expression, mike


Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great job. Very wise words, and definitely a koan to ponder. "love is life, and without it your journey reaches into nothingness." I think I'll put this in my library.

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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badgirl beth
badgirl beth

somewhere over the snow bank, TN



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I'm from louisiana and love to drink,laugh and eat seafood of course....writing is a passion of mine and as always..everyday is a learning experience... more..

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