beth, this is a beautifully done, the exude of emotional force carries with it
an impacting messege of deliverance, both in mind and spirit, the meaning is uplifting,
and leaves the reader with a lasting impression mirroring the meaning itself
and that being finding peace in the madness, the word placement is stellar,
as well as artistic in design, the sentencing is a bold context to highlight, as it's
a fine poetical result of scripting your thoughts, precision, timeless, to ponder
what love, as well as it's intentions, you have a very nice talent for expression, mike
It sounds as though bad girl Beth has a soft and confident side as well. Mike's review says alot that i would have liked to say. Your words hit home. Making the reader look deep within to find the source of their own true love . To hold your own heart for awile will surely bring you closer to the true meaning of love as you know it. Great job.
beth, this is a beautifully done, the exude of emotional force carries with it
an impacting messege of deliverance, both in mind and spirit, the meaning is uplifting,
and leaves the reader with a lasting impression mirroring the meaning itself
and that being finding peace in the madness, the word placement is stellar,
as well as artistic in design, the sentencing is a bold context to highlight, as it's
a fine poetical result of scripting your thoughts, precision, timeless, to ponder
what love, as well as it's intentions, you have a very nice talent for expression, mike
Great job. Very wise words, and definitely a koan to ponder. "love is life, and without it your journey reaches into nothingness." I think I'll put this in my library.
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