Depression
A Poem by badgirl beth
feelings of desperation
Deepening sadness
Enters the soul with emptiness
Permeating the heart with lonliness
Reaching zero humanity in the blackness
Eating it's way into the depths of your goodness
Sucking the gentleness from your senses
Sending you into a neverending spiral of hollowness
Installation of evil
Obsecene unspeakable destructiveness
Noxious unwholesomeness
*Depression*
© 2008 badgirl beth
Author's Note
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evil at it's best~~~
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when you say "evil at its best" i knew this is going to be entrancing, its' already
felt in the first word. "deepening" taking the reader into subconsious realms,
and when the spirit is sad, no lower emotion can be achieved, your words
have the ability to reach into soul as far as words can go. as you show here,
descriptors are presice, Obsecene unspeakable destructiveness Noxious unwholesomeness"
which speak of a total possession of demonized tortment in sadness, "depression"
no less than stunningly written beth, your pen never ceases to amaze me, mike
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Added on February 10, 2008
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badgirl bethsomewhere over the snow bank, TN
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I'm from louisiana and love to drink,laugh and eat seafood of course....writing is a passion of mine and as always..everyday is a learning experience... more..
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