Unfinished

A few words whispered sweetly

meant only for your ears

to inspire in you

what lies hidden

deeper within

behind burning desire

fiery, raging

seeping even through

each innocent gaze

It may not even be 

known to you

the depths longing

yearns to replace

amidst flashing lights

life unfolding

with eyes wide open

as is seen

what's said to be

meant to be 

How much more 

what will it take

when will I have it

within my grasp

to show where darkness 

leads a mind wandering

back to your sight

lasting just that time

weakening, each breath

breathe again

out, in

such life, but then

teasing dares motion toward

bitterness: the end

Reviews

[Treason and Metal]

Wow.. I liked it's freedom.. Really shows a certain confidence.. thank you once again. Nice

[Karmee]

Love your first stanza, This is a wonderful write.