Put another Layer On

Put another Layer On

A Poem by Katie Lynn

Put another layer on 
you need the makeup 
to make you look pretty 
Put another layer on 
I don't like you 
unless you wear it all 

put another layer on 
blush bronzer and foundation 
lipstick eyeshadow and mascara 
put another layer on 
that's what I hear 
everytime you say 

you look beautiful, 
I love that makeup 
because you never 
tell me you like it 
when I show you myself 
when I take off 
the makeup 

© 2012 Katie Lynn


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Thought provoking. Insecure at the end? Definitely not- she's realizing that her perception of his shallow praise is correct.
Well formed. Enjoyed visiting w/ you-in your poem~ [at

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 17, 2012
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Katie Lynn
Katie Lynn

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My name is Katie and I am just getting back to active on here... took some time off but I am BACK! I just write what I feel, I tend to rip my own poems to pieces and I'd like to get others opinion.. more..

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