Keep Going

Life is like a forest.

 

It's foggy,and dark.

 

But you keep going ,

 

not flowing.

 

You bump into something

 

and it hurts.

 

But you keep going and

 

going.

 

Reviews

[iliketowrite]

Short but really good. It flows well and is very meaningful. Every line is great. love the similie.
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[khalid]

very simple, short but at the same time, it is really amazing...so many feelings are expressed here. although it has little amount of depression, it was very nicely written...i have really enjoyed reading it..

[Alice]

"But you keep going". Life hurts and we need to keep moving forward or it will never get better.

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[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this. It's simple and holds a powerful meaning behind it. I never really compared life to a forest, but after reading this poem I do now :) It's true there are some obstacles in life (which is why it's foggy or dark) You just done an excellent job needless to say! :D



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