Twisted but true love

Twisted but true love

A Poem by Alayna~babygirl~

I love you baby's

the emotions i feel when your around are over powering

I dont know who asked but now were engadged

I asked you to marry me and you said yea

So now were all engadged

I love you both very dearly

more than you'll ever reall know

I told you i would love you forever

and i dont plan on that ever changeing

because yall are the best iv ever had

you are my first love and kiss shaunny baby

and you are my first long distince love so strong that you didint even know me and you rocked my world airhead

you both hold special places in my heart

and always will

you asked if i promissed

i said i do

you said yea baby you'll be saying that before long

i about started 2 cry

but you told me not 2

so i stayed strong for you

baby's you are my world and always will be

I love you shauny baby

I love you airhead

forever

   &

always

  <3

© 2008 Alayna~babygirl~


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Like your write, few spelling errors but I do that too, so all in all you did a wonderful write here.

Posted 16 Years Ago


your poem let me know that i had something that i lost . forever ,true love

Posted 16 Years Ago


A lot of people would judge you by what they think a poem should be, but I look at the heart of the poem . Great job Alayna. Orlando Murcia

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very nice write, lots of spelling mistakes but still a cute write.



Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 21, 2008

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Alayna~babygirl~
Alayna~babygirl~

claremont, NC