Me And My Life

Just something that came to mind...I dont know were it came from but here it is....

I sometimes sit and wonder why?

My life seems to go running wild,

Is it cause I dont control things right?

Will I have to sit and fight?

 

I love my life the way it is,

But some things just never give,

I have alot to do each day,

Wondering when life is going to change,

 

I have known this man that dont care for his kids,

To where the kids ask were there daddy is,

I cant change the man that he is,

All I can do is fight for what there dream is,

 

I am the women that does it all,

Cause I care for my family,

I am here to protect them all,

To give them life to live never having to fall,

 

Is this what life is about?

Never giving up and never leting out a shout?

I am strong within my soul,

For I am a women with hardly no flaws,

 

I am the true beliver in Jesus his self,

Cause I know when I die I will be well taking care of,

But when I grow old and that day comes,

Who will take care of my babys,

 

Will someone be there to help?

So I can leave peacefuly with out no guilt,

Cause my kids need love and to be taking care of,

By someone who really cares,

 

Not a man thats never really there,

Cause I will be there by there side,

Watching them grow and live there life,

With out no heart ache and no pain,

 

I will be happy even on there wedding day,

I be watching over them each and every day,

Cause I am a mom what else can I say,

I love you kids remember that each and every day,

I also love my husband all this will never fade away.

 

Author's Note

I just wrote this out of the blue I dont know if you will like it that will be some thing you will have to decide...Well I hope you all get the chance to read it luv lots Belinda

Reviews

[Looouise]

I have alot to do each day
^^ a lot

I have known this man that dont care for his kids
^^ don't or doesn't

To where the kids ask were there daddy is
^^ their

I cant change the man that he is,
^^ can't

All I can do is fight for what there dream is
^^ their

I am the women that does it all
^^woman

Never giving up and never leting out a shout?
^^letting

For I am a women with hardly no flaws
^^woman

I am the true beliver in Jesus his self,
^^believer in Jesus himself

Cause I know when I die I will be well taking care of
^^taken

So I can leave peacefuly with out no guilt
^^ peacefully without any guilt/with no guilt

Cause my kids need love and to be taking care of
^^ taken

Cause I will be there by there side
^^ 2nd there: their

Watching them grow and live there life
^^lives

With out no heart ache and no pain
^^ With no heartache and no pain/Without heartache and pain/ Without any heartache and without any pain

I will be happy even on there wedding day
^^ their

I be watching over them each and every day
^^ I will be



Over-all it is a very nice poem.
Tells a story and gives us a message.
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[Voice]

This is beautiful; poems written from emotions of the heart are the best. The words flow nicely and you keep the reader's attention just an amazing write...

Voice

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It's sad when only one person works at the relationship and family... a true testament to a heart full of faith and compassion... wonderfully done.