Snow

Just something that came to mind I dont even know if its any good lol

 As I watch out the window pane,

I see all white like the angels wings,

The snow is falling laying on the grass,

Covering the streets that looks like glass,

 

Its so beautiful to watch it fall,

Standing out in it is the best of it all,

I want to play snow ball fight tonight,

But my kids are sleeping through out the night,

 

I want to wake them just to play,

But I will just have to wait,

Wait till the moring comes,

Then we can have loads of fun,

 

I want to make snow angels on the ground,

Cause God sent this to us to purify us now,

To clense the earth from sickness to health,

I am glad to have the snow fall its self,

 

I stood there looking in the sky,

Wondering How God make this beautiful times,

It make the streets glow all so bright, 

As if there was thousands of courner street lights.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I dont know if this is any good just came off the top of my head as I stood out side tonight well 3 am this morning lol

Reviews

[Pete]

Very sweet. You have a beautiful heart and it shows through your writing. This made me think of the song 'Winter Wonderland'.

[emmajoy]

There's such a innocence to your poem.it 's not in any way childish but it's as if a child is seeing the world for the very first time.. that's so rare in iour cynical world. Snow angels and snowball fights... glittering and glass.like.. has the sound of snow falling on metal - bell-ringing of smow pon steel...

is lovely.. truly is..

[Marianne]

It's not a matter of being any good, Belinda....you wrote it from your heart, put your creative mind and soul into it....and obviously enjoyed writing it! THAT makes it unique and special, also giving a delightful insight into the purity of snow when it first falls. I have vivid memories growing up in Germany, embarking on all kinds of fun in the snow while it lasted. Of course, no one enjoyed the muddy slush after it melted along the streets. Thank you for your delightful poem in the many ways snow looks and feels, gifting us with so much happiness! BRAVO.

[closed]

nice poem. i like its quaintness. also its cool how you make yourself out to be the child. well written

[Cornelia Echevarria]

Belinda this is a beautiful poem .And it brought back a feeling of what Christmas was like so long ago. I enjoyed reading it.

[STAR CHILD]

oh i love this it is so beautiful

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I enjoyed reading this.

[Tiffany]

HI!!! It's been awhile right? hahaha. Anyways I thought this was really cool and cute. The way it explained your love of snow and such AWSOME!