What Make Me Mad

This is just how I feel at the moment

What make's me mad,

 

Is how others rate your poems,

 

Trying to make you sad,

 

But just to let them know,

 

Your not hurting this warm soul,

 

Leave my life alone,

 

Live your life nothing but cold,

 

Living a life of sadness,

 

Cause you arent happy,

 

Inless you put others down,

 

But let me tell you this ,

 

Your nothing but a clown,

 

Karma is a b***h,

 

It will catch up to you one day,

 

 bringing your life down,

 

So like I sad before you get what you indore,

 

What makes me mad is people that have no soul,

 

That dont get the true meaning,

 

Of what a great poem holds,

 

It might have mispelling,

 

But I dont give a damn,

 

Stop hurting us people,

 

So you can be glad,

 

Get a real life your work isent no better,

 

I will continue to write,

 

I will make my life better,

 

We dont need people like you,

 

That think your Sh** dont stink,

 

But you dont smell like roses,

 

Get over your self and leave.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tired of people puting people down for there writing and saying rude things when all you are is good to everyone else and some one that you dont eben know comes on your page and tottaly put you baby shaking syndrome poem down if you dont understand what it mean I am sorry just leave me alone and let me be...I am tired that people think that they can say wrongful things to people and get away with it...So yes I said my peace and that was that...I will not let no one bring me down and dont ever put my kids in the middle of my writing cause I love my kids and will take up for them...ty..God Bless

Reviews

[Lori]

Love it! Couldn't have said it better, and I've wanted to say this often.

[Ralphy]

Belinda you write well, and the more you write the better you become. I find no reason to give people bad review because if theytook the time to write, they deserve a reveiw unless I don't know how to respond...then nothing is better then less than the truth. Just continue to write there is enough people to read them and it's true not everything will come out roses. Let your creative juices flow...

[Windy]

GOOD FOR YOU BELINDA. YOU GO GIRL! ;) I HOPE THOSE THAT NEED TO READ THIS AND REALIZE THEY ARE DOING SOMETHING WRONG. I SEE "Kaela Craven" has already reviewed this and still did not get it but hey like you said, Karma is a b***h and what goes around comes around, just block her as I will be doing in just a minute. Frankly she sounds really full of herself (or maybe full of something that doesn't smell like roses). Have a great night my friend and again good for you. Hugs