When will the world stop the strive

When will the world stop the strive

A Poem by Belinda Rice
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just alittle something

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When will the world stop the strive,

We watch people hurt and always dieing,

You have people that starve to death,

Wishing that the goverment will help there stress,

 

We need the goverment to help with homes,

So people wont be cold sleeping under bridges with out a home,

We suffer with poverty every day,

No one want to help take the suffering away,

 

They say that were priority,

When were fighting a war thats very long story,

Bring the men back home,

so kids and women wont have to suffer so long or worry,

 

This war has been over cant the nation see,

Kids need the mothers and father home being free,

I dont care what the presedent has to say,

You dont care wether our nations ok,

 

Were the ones that have to hurt,

Cause we feel that the goverment dont give a f**k,

You borrow money from other countrys,

What are you trying to do start another tragidty,

 

Starting another war that will only kill all of thee,

Help your country as much as you do others,

Cause there not the only ones in life who suffers,

Dont you think we need the help from others,

 

Teach us real life not proverty,

Just give us a better life so we can be free,

Cause we deserve the best cant you see,

So this is what I say to you,

 

Its time for the goverment to care for us to.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Belinda Rice


Author's Note

Belinda Rice
I guess you would think this is stupid but this is how I have truly felt latly..I am tired of us suffering and our men and women being at war when the war has been over and done with....Its not far anymore to watch people go with out and all of us hurt cause the sate cant healp us on what we need and let people take charges they did not commit the crime and so much more I am tired really tired of this life and suffering in this world.

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I totally agree with you 100%. It's so true, the government needs to take care of the US firt then help others if they can, not the other way around. I would love to see our soldiers back home and fast, enough is enough. You write from your heart and I really like that. I don't spell or do punctuation well so I don't care about that kind of thing, I just know when someone it writing about something important and I like that you do it. Keep it up. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


You make such excellent points in this powerful piece... it seems the government i nothing more then a business trying to make money and we the people are nothing but a number now... excellent rant!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on July 9, 2008

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Belinda Rice
Belinda Rice

Onancock, VA



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