One Persons Hand

i dont kno where this is going let see

One person hands can damage a life,

Not thinking that person wanted to life her life,

She was beaten to many times,

Cause the mans hands kept hurting her till she was dieing,

 

She wanted to leave but was awfully scared,

That he would find her and break her in half,

So she satyed and delt with what he indored,

But her body just could not take it no more,

 

She was put in the hospital to many times,

They told her to leave or she was going to end up dieing,

She did not listen to what they had to say,

Cause of her fear of leaving blew her mind away,

 

She swore she loved him and he would change,

But every time she turn around she was the one to blame,

So one day he hit her so hard,

She fell to the foor and just feel apart,

 

Abuse is not a lovly thing,

Cause in an instant your life will be taken away,

She went to the hopital onece again,

But this time she did not make it this was the end,

No one could stop it cause he would not change...

 

Author's Note

this is for women that has be in abusive relatioships or are in on that feel they cant get out of it there are plenty of shelters to help you get away..do it before its to late...I was in a shelter called project horizon and seeing what those women went through was horifiying....you dont have to take the abuse fight it back....

Reviews

[Yvette Shaw]

Sometimes love can make us stay way beyond the point of reason. Your poem is very heartfelt and honest. You shared an important and often all to real point. I'm glad you found the strength to get out, and to share the truth. Well done...
Yvette Shaw

[Pj]

My Great- Grandmother said this: Leopard's never change their spots....you can't think and believe you can change someone and you're so right there is plenty of ways to get out of this situation. All you have to do is be brave a take the hands that are held open for you. I think the biggest thing that anyone can do, is to admit there's no future, that you have to think about yourself now and maybe even what could happen if there are kids involved, or if they could come soon. If you're not going to defend yourself and you die....you're allowing that a*****e to go and do it again to some other woman.

Great write!

[Mr. Lopez]

Besides a few spelling errors , I found the message to be an important one. The fault falls on both parties as a woman has a choice. all be it a hard one. As you know from experience , there are people who can help and offer a way out. So as not to leave a woman in this situation feeling helpless. As for the man, there is also hope but he has to want to change and must first acknowledge that a problem exists within himself. All in all I felt that your message needed to be heard and will be well received by all who read.
Thank you and Peace