To One I Am A persons Tersure To Another A Peice Of Trash

Just somehting I was feeling at the moment.

To one I am a person's tresure,

To another a peice of trash,

I've falling in love with a man,

Who make me want to crash,

 

Crashing to the floor with so many tear's,

Cause I feel all alone cause there's no intamisy here,

He does what he wants to do,

Not knowing that it hurts me,

 

It hurts my heart deep down inside,

That all I want to do is breake down and cry,

I dont even know why I even try,

Try to show love when I feel hurt and cry,

 

To one I am a person's tresure,

That's were my children come in,

But yet to another a peace of trash that's were he come's in.

Author's Note

Just the way I felt at the time things do get better thanks to the grace of god.

Reviews

[Ozymandias]

Hmn, unclear and clouded, but I'm guessing that's how you wanted it to be.
It's something close to you, but you want to share to an extent.
The way it's worded fits the old saying "One man's junk is another man's treasure" to a pretty close tee.
All in all, there could be more, but it might well take away from the gentle mystique and general distaste.
It's a poem for the imagination.
Hope it doesn't hurt too much.
Ozz.

[Mr. Lopez]

Throw out the trash and consentrate on your treasure. Poetry can be a great outlet but in the end , we are in control of who we allow to do us harm. Do not be blinded by false love. If others only cause us pain and ridicule then can that be defined as a loved one? Lovely poem Belinda.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is so true and it's amazing how we can continue to try and please someone who doesn't seem to care in kind...in fact the worse they treat us the harder we try, I've been there before and certainly will never return... great vent on the subject.

[Tiffany]

I absultly love this story, marvelos! It almost got me to tears (I'm emotinal latly)
Good job belinda, good job, love the flow of the wrods!

[KAREN BROWN]

I loved you poem it really got to my heart.You should never fill like and ones trash you have so much in store i know So many times i felt like that but it does get better and all we need to do is ask the lord to guide us through. I wrote a poem about my daughter I would love for you to read it as well as the communication one. all in all your writting really touched me in so many ways. great job

[missghostwriter7374]

Very nice write. I know excatly how you feel.

Tamra

[Angel's Lady]

One man's trash is another man's treasure....
Wow, you very aptly captured a moment alright. This is a very good piece of writing. Great job of putting your thoughts down on paper!

[Pj]

That was so fantastic! I felt the pain and I loved how you just wrote- no editing, no fixing- just the pureness of it all!