God Lend My Sister A Helping Hand

God Lend My Sister A Helping Hand

A Poem by Belinda Rice
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This is about my sister who needed alot of guidence from the lord and from life and faamily

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God leand my sister a helping hand,

Let her know life worth waiting for,

Living life is were she shall stand,

She need's your guidence everyday,

She hurts so bad please take her pain away,

She cutts her self like I did almost each and everyday,

I dont want to see her hurt I want to see her live,

My family mean's the world to me so here her cry's,

Please dont take her away from me I dont want to see her die,

I need her here God cant you see,

She mean more in life to me then to see her bleed,

She suffered from doing those awful drugs,

Cant you stop it so it doesent get worse,

She need's her life back for her kid's,

So they know how much she love's them,

To know that she can stay clean and win,

And be a special mother and never have to suffer,

Please here my cry's I want to see her better,

Let her fight hard and please God forgive her,

Forgive her for those awful sins,

You know it the the devil that's just trying to win,

Fight Shannon fight as hard as you can,

Dont give up on life it's not that hard,

Open your eyes as wide as you can,

You are my sister and I'm giving you a welcoming hand,

I wont lose you to the devil's stupid band,

Rubuke him now before it's to late,

I cant stand losing you to the devil's gate,

Ask God for forgivness he will listen to you,

For  I am God's witness,

Your family love's you I am sending you hugs and kisses,

Cause I dont want a knock at the door saying I sorry but your not with us.

 

 

 

© 2008 Belinda Rice


Author's Note

Belinda Rice
this is for my sister i know it does not rymn very well but this is how I feel when it comes to her...I want to see her get better like I am.....

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Well, I myself is not very good at rhyming but the expression of the emotion has been done perfectly. Loved this very much. I'm giving this a 100 rating. ~KA~

Posted 16 Years Ago


Brought tears to my eyes. Very sad. Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Temtation can be strong for all , even those who have faith. This pleading prayer shows your love for your sister runs deep. Continue to steer her to the lord and eventually she will see his light. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Prayer is the most powerful item we have against the ways of the enemy. This unconditional plea for your sister, reveals your innermost, heartfelt and unselfish desire, to bring about a positive change in her life. She is blessed to have such support! Please forgive my references to scripture when reviewing your work, but I feel this passage to be appropriate;

John 15:7 (New Living Translation)

7 But if you remain in me and my words remain in you, you may ask for anything you want, and it will be granted!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

Posted 16 Years Ago


It is no way to live. I hope she finds the peace she needs within. I will keep her in my prayers.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 20, 2008

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Belinda Rice
Belinda Rice

Onancock, VA



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Hi My name is Belinda I'm 33almost 37 year's old and a single mom who love to write...I have three wonderful daughter's and I have a wonder handsome lil boy that I take care of each and everyday..My c.. more..

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