God Opened Up His Hand's For Me

I came up with this last night while I was sleeping I really hate when that happens it makes me want to wake up and jump out of bed...

 

God opened up his hand's for me,

To show me the way to his secret place,

 So I know were I would stay,

He said for you are my child,

I will let you come fly free,

All you have to do it keep believeing in me,

Believe in all his glory above Cause his word's are true,

He want's us all to know were we'll be when this life is through,

He held me tight and said I'll be ok,

Dont let nothing in this word make me want to take my life away,

I am strong now each and everyday,

Thank's to God words for he spoke so gracefuly,

He said when I wake up to share what he said,

So that's what I'm doing on this very day,

He said cry on to him if you need a helping hand,

Cause he arm's are wide open he to can show you his land,

It's such a peaceful place to be it like a secret garden,

It's so beautiful and white you see all the agngel's wing's

Up there there's no more crying,

If we follow his word's we could to have wing's and be free,

No more suffering from pain and misery.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is just something that came to mind when I was asleep I dont know why but when I sleep thats were alot of my peoms come from..I hope you like it I know it does not rymn all the way but this is what I thought of just last night so please let me know what you think ty..Belinda

Reviews

[Kevin Andros]

Very Regious. Great work. And it's amazing that you thought this up when you were asleep and still remember this! I also get some amazingly great ideas for peices but forget all about it in the morning! You have amazingly great memory power! Thanks for directing me this! I'm sorry for taking so long. ~KA~

[BrightEyes]

sometimes you just have to lose some sleep when the muse hits you lol. a wonderful expression of your faith and the light that guides you and keeps you strong. nicely done.

laura

[missghostwriter7374]

Good poem, Just keep believing in Him and he will guide you in the right direction.

[Mr. Lopez]

A wonderful decaration of the promises of the lord are heard loud and clear in this poem . I see your writing improving as you get closer to god. He blesses you with his spirit and it shows in your faith and words.

I will let you
come fly free,
All you have to do is
keep believeing in me,

I really like these lines. A bit of advice....maybe if you break down your lines a bit , they might flow a little smoother. Just a thought. You really are improving on an already strong beginning to your art. Great job .

[Phill Oz O'fee]

There are accounts and teachings of many who have received knowledge and instruction through dreams. When shared, they can provide an inspirational source, for stimulating the mind with new imaginations. Thank you for sharing yours.

This passage sprang to mind;

John 7:14-15 (The Message)

14-15 With the Feast already half over, Jesus showed up in the Temple, teaching. The Jews were impressed, but puzzled: "How does he know so much without being schooled?"

It was because his knowledge of such things was spiritually received!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[Legion]

I have mixed feelings about this. The message is true, but I'm not sure about the poem itself. I think it needs more something or another. Could just be me. Don't know. Good message though.