Im Crying Out To God

its exsplains its self

I'm crying out to God with strongful tears,

Wishing and hoping that he can hear,

Hear all my sorrow and pain,

That nothing in life now feels the same,

 

I'm lost for words cause I cant decide,

To complely live my full life,

My heart is hurting deep down inside,

That all I do is sit around and cry,

 

I'm crying out to God with strongful tears,

Hoping and praying you take away my fears,

I dont know if i want to live this life,

Cause all i do is constantly fight,

 

Fighting for healing to take aways pain,

I dont know when my life will change,

It's hard god cant you see,

I feel like you abandoned me,

 

I feeling cold like a broken peace of glass,

When will things get better and how long is it going to last,

I sit alone in my room thinking of what I've done wrong to be so blue,

I need gods presence and in need of a hug too,

 

I'm crying out to God with strongful tears,

Can you please take me now,

I feel like I dont belong here,

Not one this earth but up in heaven,

 

To earn some wings and feel very plesent,

If I was up there in heaven were I belong,

I would not have to sit hand suffer this long,

I'm crying to you lord take me now,

 

I dont want to hurt my self,

I want to go up insted of down,

Hell is not a place I want to go,

So by your own hand hlep let me go,

 

I'm crying out to God with strongful tears.

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is just how i am feeling at the moment this is were i stand at life........

Reviews

[Kevin Andros]

We do feel this same way in various stages of life. Particularly when You don't have anything well happening to you and all the bad luck in the world is showering on you. It is enough to break the greatest optimist's hope, but if we can stand firm and do not move and be calm, everything passes away. Everything in this world has an beginning and an end.

Nice write. ~KA~

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Very well written. Great job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Keeping our faith in desperate times is hard to so, your words ring of strong emotions that I hope helped you work through your current blue state... nicely vented.

[Forest Green]

I've not seen 'strongful tears' used before. I hope you've worked through the hurt that inspired this poem. Some of the misspells are problematic but don't let that frustrate you too much...they are all easy fix items.

You have a soul-searching motif...writing is an excellent way of bringing everything to the surface.

Hoping the best for you and your charge.

Daniel

[TamerQtaish]

Well some of it doesn't rhyme so easy... But it doest have to rhyme :)
On a grand total, a hell of a job you done here

Thanks for letting me read yet another great piece,
All the best,
Tamer

[Danielle Asher]

I just read this piece and i believe you sent it to me a few weeks ago but I have been so behind in my requests. I am hoping you have found some strength since then. It is amazing how so many people go through these feelings. I know I have questioned life so many times in my depressed times. I don't want to give you any cliche lines but i do believe we all find what we need to hold on to. It is wonderful that you are writing in such an expressive way about your feelings.
Hope you are well.

peace,
D

[Legion]

Have you ever read the book of Job? Take comfort. He is there. You have let life pull you apart from that connection. May you find it again soon. I know this sounds weird coming from a person with the name of Legion, but it is true. Peace and love be with you.

[Luqman Qadi]

I was loging out, and I came across this poem.And I was thrust into some yesterdays of many disappointments in life. If many knew, they would skake their heads with sadness...but along with amazement if I told the story. Some people are walking or living testimony, and if the winds of life would speak...I belive my name would be mentioned. This piece sends a message of despair, and the spirit I am well aquinted. But, deep within every living thing, there is a seed that has been planted during the forming of you in your mothers womb, and that seed is...FAITH! One day I observed an ant pulling an object fifty times its size it seemed. And during this struggle, this ant never gave up its objective to get it to its destination. As I watched this awesome determination in this ant, I was inspiried to abstract the truth. I CAN BE JUST AS THAT ANT...DETERMINED TO SUCCEED IN MY OBJECTIVES,AND BY HAVING FAITH. God has a way of speaking to the defeated...through His weakess of creation. So, in you there is a seed of determination and faith, but one need to find what it is they are determined to do...or have in life. You are a WINNER, but pray for that seed of faith and determination to be touched by God. Luqman

[Floating on the feather..]

Things are meant to be the way they have been destined but also the God has planned something to help you float through it and someday come out of it. Don't lose hope, the world is dynamic. What is constant is you, things just occur and then slip down in mortality. So be strong.

A a good but depressing write.

[Sally Edwards]

You know I was where you are at a couple of years ago and felt the same, life seems as though it will never get better and everything bad just comes one after the other. Your poem is powerfully emotional, you have so captured the pain and anguish that you are feeling, remember though it will get better and always think of your beautiful children lost without their Mother. You need to get past this for them and in turn your life will improve. Keep writing and sharing with us.

[Reuben Porter]

I am not a religious person, but that does not mean I do not support those who are, I feel that to each his/her own. I wish you luck, I wish that you can find the help you need to pull yourself out of this state, whether the help you find is with friends, family or God. A very powerful poem, thank-you for the read request.