Standing on the top of the hill

it really exsplains it self if you read it

                      Standing On Top Of The Hill

 

 

I'm standing on top of the hill prasing god for what hes done,

Even though unsatisfyed of the pain I've gone through,

I have had the faith to keep beliving and living life throguh,

 

Staning on top of the hill with my arms wide open,

Crying out to god to here me for my words were uspoken,

To suufer with pain each and everyday I still prase his word to believe,

That sooner or later god will help heal me,

 

I'm standing on top of the hill holding my eyes colse thight,

Praying so hard asking were did my life go cause its not here tonight,

I wanted to fly in heaven with the lord,

To be forgiving for the sin my heart holds bold,

 

I'm standing on top of the hill waiting to see,

What is it in this life god has planed for me,

I want to give up for all eturnity cause my heart still can not be free,

I cant stand the suffering and pain that the devil has laid on my hands,

 

I'm standing on top of the hill,

Asking you god now to help me be free please help me out and see,

I want to be in heaven were I can be free from all this pain and misurey,

I ask you again to her my crys cause in this life I no longer can decide,

 

I cant live with pain any more ,

Knowing that my life hurts in sorrow that cant be indored,

I ask you god take me to heaven let me fly above the clouds and have some fethers,

You said you here our cry for we are your children,

Here mine now for time is just wasting,

 

I'm standing on top of the hill,

Please god bring your light down so I can be healed,

Let me know that you are there for I stand so bold wanting to hold your hand,

Hold me god let me know your there feeling your presents to know that you care,

 

I'm stand on top of the hill ,

Waiting on you god to take my hand,

To go to heaven with you were I belong,

I no longer feel like I have a life thats strong and bold,

 

Im standing on top of the hill.

Author's Note

This is just something that came to mind for how I've felt for way to long and wish i can be with god and feel strong and bold...

Reviews

[Reuben Porter]

Very powerful poem, I enjoyed reading it. "Don't allow your pain, your fear, or your strife to interfere with living life, do not contemplate over life or death, write your feelings each long night, despite your hardships despite your plight, the pen is stronger than the knife." What I mean by that is, no matter what you do in life, you will go through hard times, instead of considering or attempting something drastic (such as suicide) write down what you feel in poetry or stories. If you write down your feelings and share them as you are doing right now, you have a chance to help someone else who is feeling as you are. You have a chance to turn someone's life around through the power of word. Thank-you for the read request, it was very much worth my time to read this poem.

[Kevin Andros]

A powerful write. Though it seems a bit long when you look at it the first time, but this is a great a powerful write (I say that again).

Keep healthy!

~KA~

[Sally Edwards]

Belinda this is so powerful and I can tell it's straight from your heart, this is your best that I have read so far, be strong my friend and continue to write such amazing poems

[Legion]

You are with God now. Being human, we sometimes fail to see that because of earthly distractions. Do not let your pain and fear interfer with that.

[Brenda Sue]

Awesome write, strong and bold. Sometimes we don't understand, but God is right there with you. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[TamerQtaish]

This is totally awesome!
As deeper you go with the words as deeper you went with the meaning, very well written, I solute you for this, well done my friend

All the best,
Tamer

[JC Fox]

This was a very strong poem and words can not even begin to describe it. All I can really come up with is good job I'm blown away.

[Candle in the wind]

You will be healed my friend. God has given us the power to heal ourselves!Believe me!

[Wolfwind Words]

Bold and mythical, this piece has a wonderful theme to it. It captures the struggle to reach that level of life, back with god, in a place we can truly call home again.

I like what you have hear. It's really good. I think you could tweak it a little with a spell checker to make it wonderful. I only mention this, for it detracts from the power of the poem in certain areas.

Keep up the good fight and continue to write!
Thanks for the send :)