Were Do We Go

another on about god

Life has choices of kindness and care,

Were do we belong were so we stand,

If we stand tall for what we believe in,

Cause God did put us here to trust in him,

 

Believe in all his glory above,

Cause God takes our pain away so we dont feel lost,

Were is it we go when were feeling lost,

I hope its to God and his special cross,

 

He love us all no matter what are sins are,

Just ask him for his forgiveness,

Cause he cares to listen to our prayers,

Believe it people hes really there.

 

 

By Belinda Draper ( Bageant)

Author's Note

just loving god and want people to trust in him and his word

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

Nice little poem, your loving of God shines through,

[Brenda Sue]

I love the message here. Needs a little work but it is a great piece. Wonderfully penned.

[Kevin Andros]

We stay with God all the time even when we are feeling lonely and depressed. God is also with us at all the times.

I think you meant to say "Where do we go" instead of "were do we go"

You have again forgotten to capitalize "G" in God.

Nice write.

~KA~