Sing A Song Of Praise

just alittle something more about god

Sing a song of praise to God,

We are his children and he loves us alot,

Go sit down and pray with him,

Cause prayers are answer only by him,

 

Sing a song of praise to god,

He will heal your pain cause he loves you alot,

He died on a rugged cross  for us to live our life,

Sing a son of praise so he knows that were here  and we love him alot,

 

Sing it people sing it loud and clear,

We here to praise throu out the day,

praiase him and only him,

He fihts the devil for us cause the devil cant win.

 

 

 

By Belinda Draper ( Bageant)

 

Author's Note

sing that song of praise

Reviews

I can get in trouble correcting errors from a poem on praising God, but here goes.

praiseto - praise to, alot - a lot, cause - 'cause, answer - answered, son - song, were - we're, we - we're, thou out - though out, praiase - praise, fihts - fights, cant - can't

After these few corrections the poem is all set and neat :)

once it is neat, this is the review you will be getting.

Good flow, good rhythm, something I can hear church choirs sing. good job :)

[Micheal Teal]

I sing a song of praise for this heartfelt poem. The beauty and strength of your faith is evident in your words. Your soul cares deeply for people and your words have touched me profoundly. Thank you for sharing these exquisite thoughts. It is beautiful souls like you that make ones heart sing in praise.

Well done!

[Brenda Sue]

Very truthful words to live by. Wonderfully penned.

[Kevin Andros]

This is as great as the last one on God. In here too, you have forgotten to capitalize the "G" of God.

How true are your words and how comforting too. God has always watched over us and will continue to do so as we battle through our life. We should never give up faith. God always stays with us and answeres each and every prayer of us. Just sometimes the answer is 'No'.

You will be just fine, so don't panic about the surgury. Just remember, God is with you as he is with all of us. ~KA~