Surgery

i wrote this cause i am about to have 4 to 5 surgerys in one on tuesday

If it rained during my surgery,

Remember the angels are crying,

Cause God took my hand cause I was dieing,

If the angels sing a lovely song,

Just know that God wont keep me for to long,

 

He's Helping me by making me see,

That life's important that he will help me to be free,

Free from all the misurey and pain,

Gods going to breake this awful chain,

 

He's fighting the devils thats taking my mind,

Cause god is tired of seeing my cry,

I cry all way to much cause my life hurts without a touch,

The devil wont win this fight,

Cause you will never ever see me cut,

I wont cut my self no more,

 

Cause all my pain will fall to the floor,

The depression will be gone so I wont have to worry,

Cause God has the upper hand and is the one thats holy,

He'll heel me in so many ways,

I wont have to fight this awful chain,

 

If i dont come back on this earth,

Just know that Gods there and I wont have to hurt,

Dont shed no tears for I'll be right there,

My soul will never leave the one that I hold close and daer,

Remember that I love you thats all I'm going to say,

maybe it's my time to go fly and have wings.

 

 

 

 

By  Belinda Draper (Bageant)

 

 

Author's Note

i wrote this cause i am having 5 surgerys in one on tuesday the 18th and if something happens to me I want them to always rmemeber me and know that I will be free....

Reviews

[Kristopher L. Bageant]

I like how it was written. Scary momment, to say the least. But Im glad in the long run, your healthy and things are getting better for you. Love you.

Kris

[EnterUSerName]

That was beautifully written,
I loved the flow easily to understand and shared alot of emotion in my heart.

I hope everything is well with you, and I like the relation to god and the devil.
I also like how you told everyone you loved them. Its great.

[A.M. Nelson]

Annoying to read, use spell check before you post.

[Danielle Asher]

Belinda, What a beautiful piece expressing your most intense true feelings about what is happening. My prayers and thoughts are with you for Tuesday.

[Wolfwind Words]

Beautiful! :) Our prayers are with you! We will never forget anything that paints words with such beauty!

[Str8jacket]

This is such a powerful poem. Except for some spelling errors I think it was wonderful. I'll be praying that all goes well for you on the 18th.

[Sally Edwards]

Belinda I will be thinking of you on 18th, your poem is beautifully written, full of emotion, you will be well looked after. Take care and see you back here soon

[BrightEyes]

will be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers - from this piece it seems you already know that God and his angels will be by your side during this time. Hope you are better soon!

*hugs*

laura

[Karen Raquepo]

My prayers to you,that you'll be alright.God Bless!

[Legion]

I hope it all goes well for you. Keeping my fingers crossed and a prayer on my breath. Like the write. A few errors (especially in the second stanza), but a beautiful piece. God's love with you.