People like us need love to

I just now wrote this its about self cuting and depression please if you know some one like this get them help dont let them go to long with out any...thank you

 

I walk so quietly down the hall,

I dont want no one to here me at all,

I cant seem to know what to do,

 

My brain has my heart in two,

 

My boyfriend wants me in a hospital,

 from feelin all to blue,

I cut my self to many times,

I just dont know what to do,

 

Please god breake this awful cahin,

You know I dont like to feel this way,

Not now not ever at least not today,

 

I stare out in space way to much,

If you know some one like this,

 go and get them some help,

Dont let it go on way to long,

 

Cause then you will wind up losing all control,

I'm so depressed I dont know what to do,

People like us need love to,

We need family to care,

Dont leave us alone leaveing us no were,

 

We do this cause out brain cant decide,

Cause bad people cant leave us alone and let us live our life,

This is caused by being hurt and alone,

LIke I said we lose all control,

 

We dont know when we do it,

Its a chain reaction that makes us to it,

We black out intill its done,

But then its to late cause whats done is done,

 

Pleas dont judge me in a bad way,

I never in life asked to be this way,

I will be free someday,

I'm geting help this very day.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this cause i have been really depressed and this is all true about me please I hope that no one will judge me in a bad way......I am geting help today.........I dont know how long it will be till im back on but please read my poems and some reviews and rating and i will do the same to everyones when I get back....I thank everyone on here thats on my friends list you are some greta people and womderful writers.....Hope to here from you all soon.

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

I don't judge you Belinda, it takes a strong person to pour out their innermost feelings, pain and hurt for all to see. You have taken a big step to getting better.......keeping taking them little by little, day by day.......and all your friends will still be here when you come back, new and refreshed....., you can do it Belinda you are a strong person, you have proved that by starting to get help.... Am thinking of you

Sally Edwards ;)

[Amy Carroll]

It is not for people on earth to judge you my dear. I pray for you and know you will be strong. If you weren't than you wouldn't be getting help for yourself. The poem is good and wonderful for helping others. Believe in only yourself and others will follow. It already shows you are a good person and no one is bad... Just make bad choices. Yours is good and I know you will do great in the long run. I look forward for you coming out and reading more. You have great potential for yourself and in helping others. I am proud of you and admire you for your strength.

Amy Carroll