silenced by your words

this is a poem I just came up with out of the blue

 

I'm silenced by your word's,

You speake so softly and gracefly,

You make me fee like I'm i heaven,

Free from any pain or misurey,

 

To here your voice eveyday,

Just lets me know were you will stay,

Forever in my arms perhaps,

Always be forever and hope that it would last,

 

I love you more then you can see,

I'm silenced by your words to were I cant speake,

I get so weak in the knee,

Knowing I have you here next to me,

 

Knowing that this is not a dream,

I can see forever for all eturnity,

I might have my flaws,

But you excepted them to know my love,

 

I want to gow old with you,

Rocking on a rocking chair feeling the breeze blow through,

Feel it blow through my hair,

Not have to worry if you'll still be there,

 

My heart is with you forever till this day,

If it's in this world I can not stay,

If i die before I wake ,

I know i'll be with you each and everday,

 

I look down upon you to help you through,

Cause I want you to know that I'll always be with you,

In my heart you'll always stay,

So dont you cry nor shed no tears,

In heaven it's a great place up here.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I hope that you like it i just now came up with it out of no were......im just glad that i dont have writers block right now lol.....i hope you like it.

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Very lovely and sweet. Outside of some typos and grammar mistakes it is beautifully penned. Great job.

[Danielle Asher]

this poem has such a soft, sweet sentiment. I appreciate the honesty of your heart on the page.

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful poem, full of passion, tenderness and love, lucky man to have such love.

[EnterUSerName]

Holy ......that is one sweet amazing poem, id be honoured to be the man who that poem was for.

I loved reading this poem dearly, it would be a heart felt song...

[Blackbirdsong]

Outside of some typos and grammar mistakes, this is a beautifully written poem. I'm glad you don't have writer's block either. Good job and also welcome to the cafe :)