Depression

A real depressing poem I think When I am down and out I can write up to 10 poems in 20 minutes and things like this and all my other poems come flying out...

Despreeon what is it really,

Its this cold hearted broken down feeling,

A black hole you cant get out of,

Making you feel down insted of up,

You wish there was some one that could take your place,

 

You feel this pain you cant take away,

Feels like lifes just fading away,

You try so hard to pick your head up,

But all you can say is my life is so fucked up,

So fucked up you want to die,

you really dont care who really crys,

The ones who cry arent the ones who wanna die,

 

So when they want to see you face look at a picture,

and up at the sky,              and remember your love and say goodbye.

 

 

Author's Note

i would not really say this is how people should feel but we do sometimes in our life,never give up on life dont do what i have done and try to give up on everything. fight for what you believe you want in life, try your best to not get so depressed that you feel lonly and blue. Remember that no matter what there is someone that does care about you even if you dont know who they are personally..

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

Ty everyone for your reviews it means a lot God Bless

[Daughter of Darkness]

I think this is beautifully written. Your very talented. You captured the feeling of being depressed and put it into words. That's simply amazing. I can identify with the pain and I hate that other people feel this way. Stay Strong.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I know the feeling all to well, cuz I myself suffer from depression, it is indeed like a black hole. You've expressed the emotions in this piece so vividly. Wonderfully written and nicely done. Just a couple little spelling errors, but this is a great write.

Rayne