GOOGBYE

this is a poem I wrote not to long ago when I was depressed and did not know what to do if I wanted to live or die.Its sad that your heart and mind can get to this point.

Goodbye to all the ones I love,

Im feeling all to blue and out of luck,

I have no purpose on this earth,

Cause all people like to to do is see me hurt,

 

They put me down and make me cry,

To were all I want to do is die,

I have no meanings on this earth,

God take me now to stop all the hurt,

 

Goodbye to all the ones I love,

My soul can be free and fly like a bird,

Cause gods taking my hand havent you hurd,

 

Remember me always here and now,

Dont shed a tear and feel all down and out,

Give a smile and never frown,

I'm going to heaven now peace out.

Author's Note

I wrote this alittle while ago when I was depressed and feeling down cause I feel like all people want to do is see me hurt and never be happy,they always have to try and take control of my life....

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

So sad and poignant, I'm glad to see that you overcame this feeling and have control of your life, so beautifully written I shed tears for you