The Journey called life

good poem though

I lived a strong life of fear,

Always having to shed to many tears,

Were are the people that was supose to hold me near,

I wondered for to long if I am supose to be here,

Here in this life here on this earth,

I dont know why I feel like god made me hurt,

I know god dident mean it,

I think it was a leson for all good reasons,

 

I hurt my self in so many ways,

Like cutting my self to take away the pain,

Pian of suffering and pain from being alone,

I did not have no idea were to call home,

 

Living in a shelter was all to log,

Cause I lived with my three childrenand it felt so wrong,

I got on my feet and got a new home,

But then something bad happend,

I completly lost all control,

 

My children were gone I was so sad,

I took a bottle of pills to be dead from being sad,

I would have been glad to be free from misury and pain,

But hurt my self and not dieing only added more strain,

 

Cutting my self and taking pills,

Only hurt me more mentally,

Cause I diden't die like I tryed intentally,

When do I learn not to have to may fears,

Go on with life and not have any tears,

 

The tears I shed are hard to bare,

But I know in my life I have to care,

Care not only for myslef,

But for my children and the life god delt,

So when you feel like your is down,

Dont do what I did and take yourself down,

 

Cause the mental pain can go away,

If you believe in god and believe in all your dreams,

Cause only you can make your life succeed.

 

 

Author's Note

this is the longest poem i ever wrote its about what happend to my life and i wanted to share it with others so they dont mess up there self the way i did. It took alot for me to learn there is a brighter side to life and it does go on.but this is to show other dont let deppression take control of your life.

ty kevin anderson for helping with the title

Reviews

[Kevin Andros]

This is your longest and I can say your strongest work too. You seem to have perfectly explained the rocky journey called life very well. And you could have the title "The journey called life" as your title. All in all, a really superb peice you have here! thanks for sharing it in writerscafe! Keep it up! ~KA~