Arguments

Arguments i hear them all the time. i look away for one seconds and i see my family cry. to sad for me to deal with. when i try to imply on the situation that goes on nobody every listens to me. then a argument start all over agian. to much aches and pain that goes on. to much anger and grief. i wish that with a SNAP!! it would all be over my and my family with deal with it situations without voilence. SNAP!! now all the voilence is gone. or I least it would be.

Reviews

[Myrcei]

I love the emotion behind it. I could feel your anger. But you made a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. They were very very distracting. I also loved how you capitalized the word snap for emphasis but I think you should try writing in stanzas to make the poem more legible. Keep up the good work :D

[Jane Doe]

me too sista me to sista AMEN!
aahahahha
luv it girllly
-ajm

100/100