Sea-Sprired

you must be brave to walk the beach alone. after all your only human. you may be simply looking for heart-shaped rocks or orange jingle shells, when in a blink , threee giants - Air, Water, And Earth- might converge upon you to make fire. Fired, inspired, sea-spired. your heart speaks a language only you can hear. the footprints you made only minutes ago are now part of the infinite sea. a new you make new prints in the and, new marks uopn the planet, dinosuar- size next to the birds. the beach is never the same beach twice. blink and it changes, blink and it changes, blink and you are changed

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

o wow tru tru
i like but i'd try to add a littl more for a story
or add some space and rhyming words for a poem k:)
Luv it girrllly
-ajm

[Jurikosan]

Ok it's really good. no lie. but just a little constructive criticism. That's more of a story than a poem. But other than that it's really good.


95/100