would you?

  WOULD YOU????????

                   Would you kiss me?

                       Would you die for me?

                          Would you marry  me?
                 
                              Would you have kids with me?

                                Would you love me?

                                   Would  you judge me?

                                    Would you give away something for me?

    Would you cry for me?

Reviews

[deeps]

I like this everything is there that needs to be said.
And the pondering question at the end,

Would you cry for me?

Wonderful write.

[kayla garcia]

yay

[...]

... i think your knight in shining armour definitely would if you'd be okay with a couple of chinks in his armour ... for the simplicity and magic and earnestness with which you write ... for you are a ravishing poet with a heart of gold ... and you glow with that dazzling smile that is uniquely you ... you've written beautifully about what every lovely girl deserves (especially if she's a poet might i add) ... i completely identify with this write ... well done ... keep writing ... keep going ... :) ...

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

np

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

nice poetry