If I had a fantasy with you in it it would be cause?

   If  I had  fantasy  you would be in it!! CAUSE?                        
                  you mean soooooo much to me
                 i dream about you every night

                            i see you in my future

                              i want to have kids with you

                                    i want to marry you

    i want to meet your family

            i love you with all my heart and soul

                 i  love to cuddle with you

                          you mean the world to me

                                

Reviews

[José Humilde]

Nice poem. You have a different style than from myself, but I like diversity. I think to make this poem stronger, you could perhaps put these sequences into a chronological order. For instance, when you mention kids THEN marriage, It kind of thows me off. Call it the old conservative man in me, but to me that makes a bit more sense.

Thanks for the write. :D

-JH

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Hey that piece of sweetness all lotta review 5' 8''... ah girly girl!

cool!

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Robotic Assistance]

I liked it very much! It seems so innoect, so pure. Great write.

harold Veee.

[kayla garcia]

i will

[Gomer LePoet]

aw this is sweet Kayla. but dont jump to quickly. take a look around. guyz. they are every where. tall guyz, short guyz, fat guyz, good guyz and bad guyz. take ur time, tall or short or fat don't matter, but good and bad make a big difference.

[kayla garcia]

thanck u

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct and hearfelt. Thanks for sharing.

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Dutch Jr.]

Good, emotional write.

[kayla garcia]

thanx