If I had a fantasy with you in it it would be cause?

   If  I had  fantasy  you would be in it!! CAUSE?                        
                  you mean soooooo much to me
                 i dream about you every night

                            i see you in my future

                              i want to have kids with you

                                    i want to marry you

    i want to meet your family

            i love you with all my heart and soul

                 i  love to cuddle with you

                          you mean the world to me

                                

Reviews

[José Humilde]

Nice poem. You have a different style than from myself, but I like diversity. I think to make this poem stronger, you could perhaps put these sequences into a chronological order. For instance, when you mention kids THEN marriage, It kind of thows me off. Call it the old conservative man in me, but to me that makes a bit more sense.

Thanks for the write. :D

-JH

[kayla garcia]

thanx lol

[Sam Severn]

This poem is sweet n' rich as chocolate! I loved it!! ㋡

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[manchilld99]

... the beauty of boundless love , in the elegance of being simply stated. Worth reading. Feels good.

[kayla garcia]

thank you

[Unloved_kitty]

Aww this is so cute and sweet =] lovely poem ~x~

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[HorrorMaster]

Aww very cute poem

[kayla garcia]

thanx