I THOUGHT YOU WERE THE ONE

             

                                     I THOUGHT YOU WERE THE ONE

 

I believed you when you said you love me

 

I believed you when you said you want to be with me

 

I believed you when you said you cared about me

 

I believed all that but look it was all lies cause you broke my heart forth hundredth time and of course I was the stupid one to believe you and trust you with my heart and all my secrets.

 

Baby I thought you were the one I planned on marrying you but look all my plans get washed down the drain cause you don't know what you want.

 

You said I was the one for you I should never have believed anything you ever told me cause it was all lies and look now I'm the one left here with a broken heart and tears running down my face cause you broke my heart yet one more time and all I can do is cry cause you left me nothing but memories of us and what happened between us.

 

Baby I loved you and trusted you but you never did nothing to show me you felt the same way so I guess this is good bye cause you left me .

 

Bye baby i have to let you go it was just yesterday we were in love and running wild with our love and our strengths.

 

I loved you yet you didn't feel the same way

 

I trusted you yet you didn't trust me

 

I believed every word  you said yet you didn't believe anything I said

 

I still love you but if I take you back again in the end I'm the one thats gonna me getting hurt all over againg I don't know what to do but cry and remince everything about us and what we've did all 8 months we were togeather.

 

I loved you  I trusted you I put my everything into you I love you and i will always love you

Reviews

[imb126]

nice poem i love it hope you plan on moving on with your life and fine some1 new cause you are a very good person buddy

[Chris Lotus]

Very well written. I felt a sort of conflict between brokenhearted-ness and still having that spark of love for that person. I like the ending. The two final lines are quite powerful, exhibiting an epiphany then shifting to make a decision which opposes it.

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Hippy]

its good yeat sad and i would like to point out one little mistake in this line


I believed all that but look it was all lies cause you broke my heart forth hundredth time and of course I was the stupid one to believe you and trust you with my heart and all my secrets.

Forth hundredth shouldnt that be for the hundreth idk its your art maby you ment for four hundred times

[kayla garcia]

atleast someone can

[Beatles9322]

This was very sad. :( I can totally relate.

[kayla garcia]

thanx i wish that person was the one though

[Orlando Murcia]

Love is tragic at times, but that's when you realize that it wasn't love
but only a lesson learned on not finding the right one

Great work

[kayla garcia]

lol thanx that made me laugh

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Kayla, I love this piece, because it comes from the heart, believe me I've seen your pics and you're very beautiful! This is beautifully written and very open hearted. By the way Kayla, you're young and someday you're going to learn men are like parking lots, many are taken and the ones left are handicapped. Good luck, w xoxo!