MY LOST LOVE

 MY LOST LOVE

        
                         You said you loved me
                         
                         You said you wouldn't hurt me again

                          You said you would never leave me

                          But it all was lies and I actualy believed you

                          How stupid could I be

                          I trusted you with my heart and  everything in me

                          But you took my heart in your hand and you squeezed it til there was                                      nothing left in your hand but blood  

                           I love you with all my heart and soul and I don't wanna break up with her I                              just want us to be happy and I don't think thats gonna happen

                           You've hurt me soooooooooo bad that I don't think I can do this anymore                                 you said you wish you never met me that was painful to hear very painful                               
                           Well there's nothing else I can say for you to understand how I feel  cause                               nobody will but they people that have gone through heart break I planned                               to marry you and spend the rest of my life with you but I don't think your                                ready for that commitment     
                             Alot of people want me to leave you but I don't think I should  cause I                                      think your worth staying here for cause of what you've been through   these past couple of months your family lives in hati and now your
                                older sister is in the hospital cause of the earth equake in hati  and your
                                family is living on the streets and your aunt from colmbus has to go '
                                 down there and help them get back on their feet and be safe
                                 P.S. I'M NOT GONNA LEAVE YOU I LOVE YOU TO MUCH AND YOU NEED   ME RIGHT NOW CAUSE OF WHATS GOING ON WITH YOUR FAMILY.I'M    HERE I'M NOT GOING NO WHERE ANY TIME SOON.THIS IS FOR YOU
                         

Reviews

[kayla garcia]

thnx i realy appreaite the review

[Dom]

Great poem. I really liked it. Awesome job! :)

[kayla garcia]

your welcoem

[Clayton]

I gather by your writings that you’re a romantic and very much in love with a sprinkle of codependency. Being in the throws of love can make for some very emotionally powerful writing whether you’re exploring the top of the mountain of love or suffering in its gallows it always proves to be inspirational. I enjoyed it, thank you for sharing.

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Gage Purdy]

This beautiful :)

[kayla garcia]

thanx alot

[Sseoni]

Wow! I really liked this! It was very emotional and a great poem! It was very real and a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading it! :D

[kayla garcia]

ok thanx

[~*_Michelle_*~]

Wow. This is powerful:) IT just shows everything you feel.
Amazing:D