what happened in my house today

                 WHAT HAPPENED IN MY HOUSE TODAY

My cousin took a fit cause he couldn't get money for his drugs so he tried to fight my aunt and he said he was gonna kill everyone in the house I'm scared I don't want him to come back cause if he kills my grandma by making her have a heart attack I will have  to take matters into my own hands cause my grandma is my world shes the person that has been there for me through my mom and dads divorce my mom telling me she hates me and wishes I die and that I'm a mistake and was never suppost to be a real person.I hate that my cousins on drugs so bad that he wants to kill my whole family I love my grandma sooooooooooooo much and I don't want anybody to get hurt I love my grandma with all my heart and soul I wish he would learn that we all love him and want him to get better I don't want my grandma to die I wish that people will learn that them doing drugs don't hurt him only it hurts his whole family I wish people would learn that nobody in their family is against them they love them and want them to get better and that were not against him we just want the best for him.

SORRY THERE'S NO PERIODS I WAS REALY UPSET AND CRYING I'M STILL CRYING I'M SCARED FOR ME AND MY FAMILY'S LIFE I DON'T WANNA GO TO SLEEP AND WAKE UP TO THE HOUSE ON FIRE......

 

THIS IS A TRUE STORY IT REALY HAPPENED TODAY................

Reviews

[kayla garcia]

well then don't read it people

[-Insertnamehere-]

I agree, this is more fitting as a blog or something that you should tell your friend or someone who can help you. This is a writing community. If you want to write about this stuff, I suggest a poem, or an actual story with emotion and detail of the events that happened. When something doesn't have punctuation or grammar or good spelling, it doesn't attract a reader.

[kayla garcia]

well thats my story i can write it that way

[Gabriella]

In my opinion, this doesn't belong here. It'd be fitting for a blog, but this is a writing community. Details, form, punctuation, content... that's what I look for when I read stories. You can write a true story but it has to be well-written. I'm really not an insensitive person, but I'm not going to offer any of the comments the other reviewers have because I don't believe this is the right vessel for it.

[kayla garcia]

yea i know

[Mason Watts]

That seems like you should tell someone.... besides us who can't do anything but pray.

[kayla garcia]

thanx

[Carmen Garcia]

wow thats intense. ill pray for u and i hope it gets better.!

[kayla garcia]

yea me tooo it was bad now their arguing

[Manda]

wow i am so sorry. hope all gets better!