love is complecated

love is complecated

A Poem by kayla garcia
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It's about my complecated love life

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love is complecated cause i like someone but i love another and i dont't know what to do i actualy wanna be with the one i like because the one i love has cheated on me before.What should  i do  he says he loves me and that he didn't do that but others say he did what should i believe

© 2010 kayla garcia


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kayla garcia
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thanx king john

Posted 14 Years Ago


not bad, but i think you should change it to a short story with more depth into the characters and emotions. not bad to. i see it as the start to something better.

Posted 14 Years Ago


u got your point across in this piece, but could need some work. great poem. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


thanx i'll try again

Posted 14 Years Ago


its good. i mean it could be better but its stil good

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2010
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marion, OH



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