Thinking of times before.

Thinking of times before.

A Poem by ~ Otto Girl ~

Around and Around I go.

Thinking of times before.

Hoping my life does not come to a end.

Around and Around i go.

Hopen you would come home.

Around and Around i go.

Missing you so desparlty.

Around and around i go.

Thinking of times before.

Finally your home.

Finally your here.

Around and Around i go.

Thinking of times before.

 

© 2011 ~ Otto Girl ~


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And it all comes back finally, the the nostalgia returns and takes us through memories, the wanting of time to gather us up and taske us right to where we want to be! Great work love xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is interesting. It's written so that I can't make out if you're writing about a parent or a puppy. It has a 'let them draw their own conclusion' kind of flare.
Nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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