scared at night.

At Night when your not there.

All i have to to is breathe and stop and stare.

I cry when your not holding me close every second.

Baby i need your here.

I wake up with nightmares crying and screaming.

i always wishen you were here to tell me that your here and im ok.

When i wake up sweating cause i cant see you or hold you.

When i get so cold in my room or my body i wish you where here.

Baby i need to hear you say i love you right before i go to bed.

Baby i love you and want you here.

I miss you so much.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

First off, I have some criticism. You used the wrong "your' in the first line, third line, fourth line, . It should be "you're", contracting you and are. Also, there are several i's you forgot to capitalize. In the sixth line, "wishen" isn't a word, if you want to use it without the "g" ending, it's better written as "wishin'". You also need an apostrophe in "im" in the same line and in the next line you need an apostrophe in "cant". But this is a nice, sad poem about longing. We all crave the company of someone when we go to sleep.

[Taylor H.]

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, You need to fix your grammar and spelling. Also, this doesn't sound like a poem. It sounds like you're just telling someone this. Id work on your flow.

[Fantasia Allmighty]

It's very sad. I know what you mean

[Ruth]

This is sad and moving love
Never a nice feeling!
xx