Laying in That Dark Room!

Laying in That Dark Room!

A Poem by ~ Otto Girl ~

When your laying  in that dark room.

All you can think of is your baby boy.

All you can do is wish he was with you here by your side.

All you can say is Baby i need you here.

You call or text him saying baby i love you.

All you can wish is that he was touching you and kissing you.

All you can relize is you have to wait to see him the next day.

All you can say is baby i need you.

He text you back saying baby i need you baby i love you so much.

You cry wishing he would be holding you close.

All you can is pray to god to let him know you are there for him.

All you can do is text him and wish.

All you can say is Baby i need you here.

When your laying in that dark room.

© 2010 ~ Otto Girl ~


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To the point and sweet. Be careful with your punctuation though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is really cute. awsome write. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


A passionate write sweety
The heart knows no bounds when there is love involved:)
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is cute :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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~ Otto Girl ~
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