The Scary ride.

You stand in line and you think your scared.

The line is moving its almost your turn to get on.

You stand there you baby tells you that you will be ok.

Finally you sit down on the scary ride.

The tracks start to move.

Your heart is pounding.

He grabs your hand.

You go up.

All the sudden you fall straight down a 90 degree angle.

Finally the ride is over.

You get off saying that was totally wicked.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Hmm, have to disagree lmao
I stand in nervousness
Get on the ride
If I am lucky, don't have a heart attack, through fear of heights and then..
Get off, RELIEVED! LOL
Cool poem!
xx

[Sarah]

lol dude i'm going to lagoon next week ahhh

[Paul Okeke]

good ...&okay

[~ Otto Girl ~]

THis poem is not about love its about being scared and over coming your fears on a ride you dont like to ride or saced to.

[*Always be Me:)*]

nice. but start writing more different poems, not just about love.

[zappy]

nice poem very cool