Baby last night

Baby last night

A Poem by ~ Otto Girl ~
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just wanting to be with my baby forever.

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Baby last night.

When you told me you where going to make a big proposal.

I stopped and cried.

i had to stop and think that i am the luckiest girl on the planet.

baby i stoped and imaganed that me and you are going to be together forever.

Baby when you said you would take my hands and look me in the eyes.

And say Baby you are my life my world.

You mean the world to me.

Would you marry me.

 I have no idea what i was going to say.

But all i can say is yes and Cry my eyes out.

Baby all i can think is having kids with you baby.

And just being able to be in your arms forever.

Baby i love you so much.

© 2010 ~ Otto Girl ~


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Wonderful
You have captured the emotion really hon
Like the structure too!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


this i lovely and mind full.....heart heart catching....i wish i know how it feels to a girl when they hear proposals

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awww the cutest thing ever!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww cute

Posted 14 Years Ago


cute hun

Posted 14 Years Ago


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D thats amazing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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